Animals were doing tricks, lifting up girls like strongmen. The tent was red and white. The tent was crowded. The chandelier was tingling. I was amazed. By Sophie
We think that your sentences are amazing! We particularly liked your simile (lifting up girls like strongmen). Well done! From Y2 children at Holy Trinity Rosehill Primary, UK
Wow! Brilliant sentences Sophie. I can see you will soon be writing on 100WC!
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